It has a very good imagery, and even it´s a bit short it is a bit funny.If I were you I would change the title; adding a socking one, by this way the story will work better.Even tough, well done!Silvia Rodríguez Corrales
It´s very funny and represents a good use of dialogues and topic. Be careful with some grammar mistakes.
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It has a very good imagery, and even it´s a bit short it is a bit funny.
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Even tough, well done!
Silvia Rodríguez Corrales
It´s very funny and represents a good use of dialogues and topic. Be careful with some grammar mistakes.
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