It's very cute! I love it!
uooooo, very direct!I like the story, very clear! :)Good work!
It´s a very compact story. The questions make the story more opne-minded; and it has a socking ending that helps the story to work better. Silvia Rodríguez Corrales.
Good work! It´s really really good! You have got a lot of imagination...keep on writing please!! XD
Oh!!! Perfect! I really like it! Good use of dialogues and questions! Very apropiate topic choice!
It's very cute! I love it!
ResponderEliminaruooooo, very direct!
ResponderEliminarI like the story, very clear! :)
Good work!
It´s a very compact story. The questions make the story more opne-minded; and it has a socking ending that helps the story to work better.
ResponderEliminarSilvia Rodríguez Corrales.
Good work! It´s really really good! You have got a lot of imagination...keep on writing please!! XD
ResponderEliminarOh!!! Perfect! I really like it! Good use of dialogues and questions! Very apropiate topic choice!
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