martes, 13 de diciembre de 2011

EXPECTATION´S QUEUE

María was waiting in the Manolita´s queue to buy a lottery ticket, she wanted to be rich this Christmas.
She spent long hours in the queue, but she didn´t realized that the person who was in front of her, was to change her life.
after a long time talking at the end of the queue María gave her telephone number to this person, and also they decided to buy the same number for the lottery.
They decided to buy the number 21911 because this number reflected the day that they were in the queue.
After two months the day arrived, and certainly the winning number was 21911.
It was incredible, actually they live in Madrid Center and they have 3 little kids.

Angela

3 comentarios:

  1. It is a normal story, something that can happen, something predictable.

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  2. A nice love story! but you have some grammar mistakes like here: "she didn´t realized" after use did, the following verb is in infinitive. You should use: she didn´t realize. And you confuse a false friend in the last line: "actually they live in Madrid" I think you want to say nowadays or these days. Because the meaning of actually is "en realidad o realmente"
    Even so, come on, don't give up!

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  3. i see Ignacio´s point. I don't think it's predictable, (winning the lottery isn't), but it's true the story lacks surprise or irony at the end.

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