I am gay and I am not ill and I haven´t got any illness like you said, I love the sports all sports, my parents are good parents but you have reason about something I have a problem yes. Mi problem is people like you, people think that in the twenty-first century to be homosexual is a illness, people who want take out our rights, these rights because we are fighting for that, now I must explain to my son why there are people like you, yes sir my son. He has a very normal life and we are very normal parents but the same time as I suffered a lot of problem for my condition he is suffering similar situation because his father is homosexual. Could you said me why?
Richi
I like the criticism against society when the main character try to express his/her dissatisfaction.
ResponderEliminarThe picture is very well-chosen, you can see a pigeon with the typical rainbow of these people. Good work! But in my opinion, homosexual people already have their own rights. Rights which belongs to any human.It´s good fighting in an arabic country where rights have not been given yet, but I think Spain is already tolerant
Congratulation!
ResponderEliminarI like it!
ResponderEliminarIt express an opinion with respect and education.
It doesn´t has a shocking or surprising ending but is very moving and real. The author makes us empathize with the main character. Good work!
Bea Ara
good, honest writing. Unfortunately it's NOT a story!
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